Another story idea – It’s very important because this is being published already. The art IS DONE, I just need a review or two about what you think of the story.
In 2347, technology had advanced so far, that scientists decided to create a super-scanner, that could scan down the DNA structure of humans, using special stones called ‘Cyphionite’. When someone died, they could just import their memories and DNA into a cyborg, and continue where they left off. The scientists also eventually started to scan down the earth.
But in that same year, an idiot got hold of one of the Cyphionite stones, and imploded the earth with it’s power. A few hundred scientists that were headed to mars for data collection saw this event, and took the data from the Earth and the little humans they had scanned, and reformatted everything.
2408, Earth is now ‘Cyber-World’, and about 1400 humans are left on Cyber-World earth. Cyber-World is now reduced to a water-filled planet, with only 3 land masses left. The land masses are now Azure, Qui-Yen, and Xiao-qi. These countries each have their own royal family, and are ruled by COMPLETE dictation. One law broken, and your punishment is instant death. All of the humans on Cyber-World are cyborgs. The world is like a large video game now. It is an enormous Data Structure, that now can have bugs in it. The story starts off with a girl named Katao. Heir to the throne in the Azure Royal Family. She’s fiesty, and is sick of this dictation.
She hears of a legacy of one of the Cyphionite stones being held in the Xiao-Qi royal families holy grounds. She travels there in persuing the stone. Once she finds it, she is caught by the son, and heir of the Xiao-Qi royal family, Zaid. They both want out, and decide to team up. She discovers that the Cyphionite stone is on a necklace that he wears. Once they escape from the Xiao-Qi territory, they start traveling around.
..But it turns out there was a HUGE bug in the scanning down process… the Cyber-World is infected with viruses, and it’s up to Katao and Zaid to use the power of the Cyphionite to take down viruses and tears in the data. (don’t forget, they’re cyborgs! They’re a lot stronger than you think) After they discover this, they go to see Zaid’s seer, a young child and her grandma, to figure out what to do to save the world from dictation, and the horrible viruses that scan people’s memories down for power.
That’s about it so far! Thank you SOOO much for reading! I hope this is interesting…